Talk:Assigned Male

• That's it? I'm sure you can do better than that. oddguy 16:41, 27 April 2015 (EDT)
  • Admittedly, I'm not very funny. Is it getting better, though? BlackGhost94 02:32, 28 April 2015 (EDT)
    • Needs more pictures or something. oddguy 03:25, 28 April 2015 (EDT)

• I added a section about her fight with Asa and BWW. I hope this isn't too much of a shameless self promotion, I just felt this article needed to beefed-up, and I did talk shit about my own site. oddguy 17:21, 28 April 2015 (EDT)

What are your feelings on this?

• Finished? Or needs more work? oddguy 10:03, 2 May 2015 (EDT)

Does it matter who offers feedback? ^reply 10:05, 2 May 2015 (EDT)

• I was actually asking the guy who's constantly editing this page, but if you have an opinion I welcome that too. oddguy 10:31, 2 May 2015 (EDT)

Characters needs an introduction paragraph. The last two sections don't flow with the first three. My impression is they were afterthoughts.

We discuss the plot and characters but after that, nothing. I want something to chew on. Maybe there could be a section that details how the comic starts, and changes that happen as the comic progresses, and its current state. I can't put my finger on it but there is definitely something missing. We also are lacking any in depth information about the author. That would be a good way to support the last two sections. ^reply 11:14, 2 May 2015 (EDT)

Something else that might be interesting would be predictions about the comic and its author. I dunno. It just seems the article had a really strong start then it ends with a whimper. Hope that helps. ^reply 11:16, 2 May 2015 (EDT)

• I haven't actually read the article yet... I'll look it over and try to improve it. As far as the author, all we know is that she used to work with children and she tried to get rid of criticism of her comic. I don't really have the energy to try and dox her or anything. oddguy 12:06, 2 May 2015 (EDT)

• Okay, I read it and added some pipes and I think it's fine. I think you're criticizing it too much like a review instead of an ED article, which is understandable because it's written like one. But there is no real information about the author or why she started the comic and no one who reads ED cares about how it progressed and changed. All I think it's really missing is an "Art" section. I'll wait a few days and see if the guy writing this thing adds one, and if not I'll add one myself. At that point I think you might as well stick a fork in it until some new drama arises. oddguy 13:23, 2 May 2015 (EDT)

I think your review comment sums it up. ^reply 13:55, 2 May 2015 (EDT)

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• Done. oddguy 04:35, 3 May 2015 (EDT)

I read the article and enjoyed it. I also read the Bad Webcomics review and enjoyed that as well. As for the comic itself? Terrible. Vermin    10:04, 3 May 2015 (EDT)

• Well, after about six days, I think I've improved this article a lot, with help from some others, of course. This is the first time I ever really worked all that much on an ED page, and even though it's not perfect yet I'm actually kinda proud of it right now. I have a good feeling that the comic and/or the creator are going to produce much more lulz in the future and it'd be a good thing to keep an eye on. I appreciate both positive and negative feedback, and though I don't consider myself particularly funny, I do think that this PoS is more than worthy of an ED article. BlackGhost94 16:29, 3 May 2015 (EDT)

• I like it. I think it's a good article. Well written. Good job. oddguy 16:34, 3 May 2015 (EDT)

put it on AOTN.

• Because why not? oddguy 12:22, 5 May 2015 (EDT)

• Wow, I write my first article almost by myself and it gets featured in like two weeks? I feel kind of good right now. Cue unwarranted self importance. BlackGhost94 21:38, 13 May 2015 (EDT)

• You're lucky the most webcomic obsessed person on the site is also an admin. But it's really a good article. oddguy 12:25, 14 May 2015 (EDT)

• Oh, I realize that. I was mainly joking. BlackGhost94 12:55, 14 May 2015 (EDT)

Needs moar 34

The (literal and figurative) butthurt must flow. Guillaume.r 20:09, 13 May 2015 (EDT)

Could someone make mention of how insufferably smug the expressions on everyone's face's are when they're on their SJW sandbox in this heap of shit? McBastard 12:23, 14 May 2015 (EDT)

• Done, and done. BlackGhost94 13:10, 14 May 2015 (EDT)