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-->Warnings: Yes, this fic has warnings. Excessive nudity, language, torture, pedophilia, voyeurism, watersports, scat, sex, rape, and rage-inducing topics. This fic should not be read by children or other living things. EVER. --->—Warning for the sporking of the first of the series.

Long before Rose graced the Harry Potter fandom, there was another Fix Fic series that centered around nudism. Impossible, you say? Hoooo boy, don't we wish.

Written by a fellow by the name of Neil, the series starts off innocently enough, though with a clear Hermione/Harry coupling and the fact that Neil chose to use another fanfic as his canon, making it basically fanfiction of fanfiction. Then two Mary Sues by the names of Jamie and Caitlin show up and things go downhill. You see, Jamie is from a family of naturists and begins to preach to Hermione and Harry (who are her professors at Hogwarts) about how oppressive and hateful she thinks clothes are. Caitlin is raped by Madame Hooch, adopted by Hermione, and befriended by Jamie. She quickly picks up nudist ways from Jamie and convinces Hermione and Harry to adapt to that lifestyle as well. We are then treated to an endless description of naked, underaged girls, rape, attempted rape, speeches on how terrible clothes are, unhealthy fixations on genitalia, and sex. Lots and lots of sex. And that's just the first story. Hermione and Harry are eventually married and also adopt Jamie and her "extremist nudist" sister Emily and befriend a shy Slytherin girl named Kim, all of whom also end up taking up naturism.

In between the nudism, there is a plot being run by the new Minister of Magic Emma Wrong, Madame Hooch, Crabbe, Goyle, and a man named Damien, to bring Salazar Slytherin back to life.

A sporking of Hogwarts Exposed can be found here. A sporking of Hogwarts Too Exposed: A Slytherin Among Us can be found here. A sporking of Hogwarts Overexposed can be found here.

Not to be confused with Hogwarts Exposed Timeline

Angst What Angst: The Mary Sues get over their rapes or brushes with rape rather quickly, which is very creepy, especially in the case of Caitlin (imagine Pollyanna from The League Of Extraordinary Gentlemen, only played straight). The only one who shows any sign of post-traumatic stress is lectured and guilted by her best friend into going back to nudism and having sex.
Arranged Marriage: Balla Buster had one of those.
Attention Whore: Good God, Lyra!
Author Appeal: Pretty much the entire thing. Worst offenders are the characters peeing themselves, the girls having shaved crotches, and the girl-on-girl bits.
Be A Whore To Get Your Man: In Hogwarts Too Exposed, Hermione goes on a dinner date with Harry, wearing a dress that is so sheer, she is practically topless. The girls do this as well, though granted they dress like strippers anyway. Ginny tries this in the first fic on Harry, to no avail, and is told off by Hermione, even though Hermione would go on to do the same thing.
Beyond The Impossible: So you made it through the first fic...and now there's three more to go. Each one worse than the last. Really.
Big Bad: Salazar Slytherin
Big Brother Is Watching: Apparently the Ministry of Magic has a spell that lets them monitor if a girl's hymen breaks before she is fifteen, to prevent underage sex. It is never explained if this counts for it breaking in non-sexual situations.
Bi The Way: Emily, at least according to her preference in ice cream flavor. There's also the oral sex scene and naked showering, though Neil tries his hardest to convince us that it's "innocent".
Broken Aesop: Amanda's near rape at the abortion clinic happened because "bad things happen to good people in stories to help character development and to teach lessons to characters that they otherwise would not have learned". The only reason she went ahead with it, however, was because her boyfriend (who scoped out the place ahead of time) failed to inform her of how shady and unsafe the place clearly was.
Camp Gay: Rishard Simone
Character Derailment: Harry and Hermione are soppily in love, Ginny is a sex-obsessed whore, Snape is the sensitive headmaster of Hogwarts who is madly in love with Ginny, Luna is running a magazine called "Playwizard", Ron is a werewolf who cheated on Hermione and served time in Azkaban and Malfoy had an affair with an American witch while under the name "Cedric Diggory", only to later marry Ginny. And that's just for starters.
Chickification: Luna, who goes from her awesome canon self to running Playwizard and pining for a baby of her own, certain that no man will ever want to sleep with her. Moaning Myrtle, of all characters, also gets this, lamenting how she died before ever having sex and begging to be allowed to watch Jamie and Alex have sex as a result.
Completely Missing The Point: When Caitlin and Emily have oral sex, Harry wonders if he and Hermione ought to be worried about it. Hermione launches into a speech about how it's just experimenting and it's normal for girls to want to blow each other and they certainly aren't gay. She fails to make any mention of whether or not they should be worried that Caitlin and Emily are thirteen and twelve respectively and engaging in oral sex.
Contrived Coincidence: Usually happens to cause the characters to shed their clothes.
Did Not Do The Bloody Research: Happens quite often, due to the American author trying badly to sound British. One notable example is in Hogwarts Overexposed, when Caitlin mentions that a magical animal tried to "bugger" her. "Bugger" means to sodomize and the animal had grabbed her vagina.
Easy Evangelism: For nudism, of all things
Everybody Has Lots Of Sex: Dear lord yes!
Good Girls Avoid Abortion: Apparently abortion is illegal in the wizarding world. When Amanda goes to get one, she is nearly raped by the abortionist.
Hot For Teacher: Jamie plans to give Harry the "gift" of her virginity because he saved her parents from Voldemort's Death Camp and thus indirectly saved her life. Thankfully, he talks her out of it.
Ikea Erotica: Very much so
Incest Is Relative: Okay, so Caitlin and Emily are technically sisters by adoption and not blood. That same feel is there when they perform oral sex on each other.
Mary Sue: A good many
- Purity Sue: Hermione, Caitlin, and Jamie, who are all stunningly beautiful and wise beyond their years. Hermione and Caitlin both have non-canon Empathy powers and Jamie actually turns into a unicorn as her Animagus form.
- Jerk Sue: Emily. While she doesn't really beat people up, her various pranks on the shy Kim (including tricking Kim into sitting in a position so that an unfamiliar boy can look up her shorts) are very cruel. Her "extreme nudism" is probably also grounds for sexual harassment.
- Relationship Sue: Sam, for Ron. Alex, Matt, Evan, Randy, Brian, Roger and Tyler for Jamie, Caitlin, Emily, and Kim.
May December Romance: The twelve-year-old Emily and the twenty-year-old Roger.
Meaningful Name: Perhaps the only redeeming feature of the series. It's pretty easy to guess what sort of people Emma Wrong, Ebenezer Bullchip, and Phineas Buster and his wife Balla are.
Nausea Fuel: So very, very much. Keep in mind that for almost all of the rape, sex, and nudism, the girls are about twelve.
New Powers As The Plot Demands: Hermione and Caitlin's Hyperempath abilities, along with Emily's Seer powers.
Toy Ship: Evan and Caitlin.
Obviously Evil: The abortionist keeps evil-looking masks, spiked instruments, and human bones in his clinic and makes comments about how he gives discounts for girls who are "easy on the eyes". For some reason Tony doesn't see fit to mention this when he arranges for Amanda to get an abortion there.
Our Werewolves Are Different: Apparently werewolves can't Apparate despite doing so in canon and are extremely horny before transforming. To the point at which Ron has sex with Sam thirty four times and starts to eye up Harry.
Psychic Link: Hermione and Caitlin, again.
Ron The Death Eater: The author makes no secret of the fact that he dislikes the Ron/Hermione and Ginny/Harry pairing. Ron starts off as a werewolf who just came out of Azkaban and was dumped by Hermione after he cheated constantly on her. Ginny, meanwhile is a horrible slut who toys with both Snape and Malfoy and ends up teaching the Sex Ed classes. On a more...unique note, Madame Hooch is a child molesting rapist who is working for the evil Emma Wrong.
Sickeningly Sweethearts: Harry and Hermione, Jamie and Alex
Rape Is The New Dead Parents: Happens to Caitlin upon her introduction to the story. Also nearly happens to Jamie, in her backstory, Kim, and Hermione.
Rouge Angles Of Satin: Constantly, which is odd because Neil constantly credits at least three betas at the end of every chapter.
Screaming Birth: Played straight with Amanda, averted with Hermione (though she does anticipate it).
Shallow Love Interest: Pretty much everyone in a relationship act like they're in a porno and have the personality of cardboard. Probably the worst are Sam and Hermione.
Sex Equals Love: With a ceremony and everything.
Shilling The Wesley: Emily is Neil's favorite character, which means we're supposed to agree with her when she dresses like a stripper to attract the attention of a twenty-year-old man (while she herself is twelve) and then insists that their love is Pure and Innocent.
The Complainer Is Always Wrong: Despite going on about how they understand that nudism isn't for everyone, the girls constantly look down their noses at people who are offended by their walking around naked. Ron gets it pretty bad as well. A prime example would be Hogwarts Underexposed, when he is the only character to be uncomfortable with Hogwarts' new optional clothing policy. When he tells Sam that he wants Timmy and herself to be clothed, he's instantly treated by Sam, Harry, and Hermione, as a terrible prude who was channeling the "controlling" Mrs. Weasley.
The Unfair Sex: Sam is constantly making Ron uncomfortable by walking around naked and arguing that he should be naked, yet he is treated as being unreasonable for not wanting to join in on the nudism. Likewise, the girls constantly gossip happily about male genitalia and sex, but when Caitlin's boyfriend asks for her to consider wearing a longer skirt because he's not comfortable with strangers having a view of her privates, she considers him horribly controlling and dumps him.
Unfortunate Implications: Harry's naked tickling sessions with his underage, adopted daughters.
- Virtually every woman in the series wants to see/touch a naked guy, have sex, hear about what it's like to have sex, or be a guy.
- When Hermione is pregnant, she is heavily pressured by Caitlin to receive "Hyperempath massages", which would involve Caitlin massaging and rubbing everywhere on Hermione's body. Hermione, understandably, is uncomfortable with this, but Caitlin refuses to take "no" for an answer. The big reason for these massages? Because she doesn't want Hermione to get wrinkly or saggy or have varicose veins after the pregnancy, heaven forbid. And when Hermione appeals to Harry to back her up, he basically drools at the thought of her staying hot and offers no support at all.
- In what might be a case of Hide Your Lesbians, Caitlin and Emily perform mutual oral sex on each other; Emily can't stop ogling her shy eleven-year-old dormmate Kim, emotionally manipulating her into nudism--or, indeed, forcibly undressing her; and Kim fixates on Jamie's breasts. But, they hasten to reassure the readers, it's okay, because they aren't gay. They're just curious about each other's bodies! Riiiiiight.
  - Not to mention, but the Schoolgirl Lesbians Caitlin and Emily would be slightly less creepy if Caitlin was not continually going on about having been sexually abused and if they weren't adopted sisters of fourteen and twelve, respectively.
Wall Banger: A ton. One particular one happens in Hogwarts Overexposed, when a group of students are forced to take off all of their clothes to make a rope to climb trees. As opposed to using magic. Neil tries to handwave it by pointing out canon's inconsistencies with conjuring, to explain why they didn't simply conjure rope. That still doesn't explain why they didn't use spells to levitate the students up.
What Could Have Been: According to Neil, he considered having Emily die with Jamie's parents.

The YMMV (Your Mileage May Vary) Page

Accidental Nightmare Fuel: The underage sex and nudism aspects can be deeply unnerving, especially for people with siblings or children around the ages of the characters.
Audience Alienating Premise: If you looked at Harry Potter and decided that what this really needs is hamfisted and hypersexualised nudist propaganda with a side order of misogyny and stilted dialogue, Hogwarts Exposed might be for you.
Cliche Storm: Hoo, boy
Complete Monster: Quite a few.
Creators Pet: Emily gets this a lot.
- Jamie's first introduction is Hermione talking about how she's best at everything, and Caitlin's is sympathetic! Snape telling Hermione about her angsty backstory.
Critical Research Failure: Apparently they don't use the metric system in France , of all places.
Designated Hero: Jamie, Emily, Caitlin, Hermione, Sam, Claudia, and Harry Potter himself.
Designated Villain: The girls' rivals, especially the two Slytherin rivals who only wanted Emily to be clothed in the dorm.
Draco In Leather Pants: Snape, who's friendly, supportive and gets on really well with Harry and Hermione.
Freud Was Right: As noted on the main page, the resident Psycho Lesbian gets killed by being impaled on a unicorn horn. May also fall under Unfortunate Implications.
Fridge Horror: As noted in Unfortunate Implications below, Roger shows signs in the fic of being a pedophile. When we last hear of him, he has taken up a relationship with Amanda. Amanda, who has just had a baby of her own...
Funny Moments: Emily and Caitlin have to give Evan an hour long sex ed talk. His misconceptions are pretty funny, especially when he makes a certain statement.
- Numerous spitefics, but "Uncle Booboo" takes the cake.
Generic Doomsday Villain: We're told that the Great One will usher in a reign of terror worse than Voldemort, but we're never given any evidence that she's either capable of this or evil enough.
Glurge: When the fic isn't going into rape, torture, pedophilia and bodily functions, and sometimes even when it is.
Harsher In Hindsight: The entire premise, in light of some of the details of this news story.
Heartwarming Moments: Hermione adopting Caitlin, full stop.
- On the other side, some of the Revenge Fics invoke this with Kim, especially in the beginning of Too Exposed when she's in dire need of comfort.
Hilarious In Hindsight: Jamie owns a robot unicorn.
- Catlin dancing with both Matt and Randy. Funny in 2003. Fucking hilarious in 2011, after the Geico "Does It Take Two To Tango?" Ad.
- The Trust Fall exercise can never be taken seriously after the Tosh.0 "Surprise Trust Fall" bit.
- Characters are frequently described with adjectives like "glistening" and "dazzling." A few years after it was written,

Twilight was released and those descriptions took on whole new connotations.

- - Ron at one point states that he wouldn't have a problem with going nude if he had a build like "a Greek Adonis," a common description in the Twilight series for Edward.
  - If Ron wanted Adonis DNA, there's somebody he could ask...
- The line "Suddenly Ron was a wolf" is apt to make readers think of Doom Repercussions Of Evil.
- In one scene, genitalia are referred to as a "you know what".
  - On a similar note, it's hard for anyone who's read My Immortal to take the "perverts taking naked photos" arc seriously.
Idiot Plot: Both photo arcs. The first occurred because the girls didn't tell Hermione that her special charm for appearing to be clothed was gone; the second was because Emily posed nude for her Slytherin boyfriend, despite his Obviously Evil brother and including her posing in such ways as leg splits showing the entire world what's between her legs.
Mary Sue: A good many:
- Purity Sue: Hermione, Caitlin, and Jamie, who are all stunningly beautiful and wise beyond their years. Hermione and Caitlin both have non-canon Empathy powers and Jamie actually turns into a unicorn as her Animagus form. Even Jamie's arch-rival Dick, who tried to kill her earlier in the fic, can't stop drooling over her when he sees her naked.
- Jerk Sue: Emily. While she doesn't really beat people up, her various pranks on the shy Kim (including tricking Kim into sitting in a position so that an unfamiliar boy can look up her shorts) are very cruel. Her "extreme nudism" is probably also grounds for sexual harassment.
- Relationship Sue: Sam, for Ron. Alex, Matt, Evan, Randy, Brian, Roger and Tyler for Jamie, Caitlin, Emily, and Kim.
- Copy Cat Sue: Jamie. She's often described as having Harry's courageous personality as well as his kind heart and Hermione's intelligence and drop-dead good-looks (Though in-canon, Hermione was a When She Smiles type. Also, Jamie's constantly likened, in jest, to have been a "secret love-child" of Hermione's or a kid sister, their looks are so close, to the point of Unfortunate Implications because it's Harry making most of those comparisons). However, she's not as brash or foolhardy as Harry was growing up (her decision to dive into a frozen lake to save a child's doll notwithstanding) nor is she up-front with or arrogant about her intellect as Hermione was (granted, we're told this by the author and not shown, but that's beside the point). In essence, she's got the best of Hermione and Harry without the flaws that allow for character development or interest.
- Black Hole Sue: Nobody who meets the girls misses an opportunity to gush over how amazing they are and become nudists, and even their enemies have a Perverse Sexual Lust towards them. This often results in highly disturbing semi-rape scenes.
Moral Event Horizon: Depending on who you support, either Hooch raping Hermione, and Slytherin ordering the girls killed, or Emily forcing Kim to be nude to fix a vote in Emily's favor, Emily forcibly stripping Kim, or Ron basically being guilted into going into uncomfortable situations that he doesn't want to go in.
- Rishard giving those potions to the people in the competition. No matter what you think of the characters, it's pretty hard to wish that on anyone.
Narm: The end of Too Exposed Chapter 5. Harry and Hermione are talking about how Draco would have no chance taking Timmy away from Sam and Ron. Cut to Draco's lawyer telling him how good his

chances are. One almost expects a laugh track.

Nausea Fuel: So very, very much. Keep in mind that for almost all of the rape, sex, and nudism, the girls are about twelve.
Ron The Death Eater: Ron starts off as a werewolf who just came out of Azkaban and was dumped by Hermione after he cheated constantly on her. Ginny, meanwhile is a horrible slut who toys with both Snape and Malfoy and ends up teaching the Sex Ed classes. On a more...unique note, Madam Hooch is a child molesting rapist who is working for the evil Emma Wrong.
- And let's not forget Neville indecently assaulting Hermione.
- Though Crabbe and Goyle weren't exactly nice in canon, they weren't pedophile rapists like they are in the fic.
Double Standard Rape Female On Female: Emily pressuring Kim to go naked. Often. Despite the fact that she says seven times in one scene alone that she doesn't want to do this. Averted with Hooch's rapes of Caitlin and Hermione, however. So perhaps it's only okay if you're an attractive eleven-year-old girl who happens to be a main character?
Sister-Sister Incest: It's very, very difficult not to view the scene in which Emily and Caitlin perform cunnilingus on one another as this, no matter how many times the author says it's non-sexual.
Some Anvils Need To Be Dropped: Kim's mini-speech about us taking for granted our senses and not realizing how good we have it.
Strawman Has A Point: The Obviously Evil Dick Bancroft rants about how much of an idiot Jamie was to dive into the frozen lake to rescue a child's toy.
- In the Hogwarts Too Exposed, Bullchip points out that Harry and Hermione are perverts because they hang out naked with their naked adopted daughters.
- Apparently we're supposed to think Ron's being a controlling bastard when he says that he believes that Sam and Timmy are being brainwashed into nudism by Emily, Jamie, and Catlin and that they are all to start wearing clothes around the house.
- Matt asks Caitlin to wear pants. This is portrayed as controlling and evil, but all he wanted her was for her not to be seen as an exhibitionist.
Toy Ship: Evan and Caitlin.
Unfortunate Implications: Harry's naked tickling sessions with his underage, adopted daughters.
- Virtually every woman and girl in the series wants to see/touch a naked guy, have sex, hear about what it's like to have sex, or be a guy.
  - That the closest thing to a strong, independent woman in Hogwarts Exposed is the main villain is an Unfortunate Implication in itself.
- When Hermione is pregnant, she is heavily pressured by Caitlin to receive "Hyperempath massages", in which she would massage and rub Hermione's entire body. Hermione, is uncomfortable with this, but

Caitlin won't take "no" for an answer. The big reason for these massages? Because she doesn't want Hermione to get wrinkly or saggy or have varicose veins after the pregnancy. When Hermione appeals to Harry to back her up, he doesn't.

- In what might be a case of Hide Your Lesbians, Caitlin and Emily perform mutual oral sex on each other; Emily can't stop ogling her shy eleven-year-old dormmate Kim, emotionally manipulating her into nudism--or, indeed, forcibly undressing her; and Kim fixates on Jamie's breasts. But, they hasten to reassure the readers, it's okay, because they aren't gay, they're just curious about each other's bodies.
- Schoolgirl Lesbians Caitlin and Emily. Caitlin often discussed having been sexually abused. They're adopted sisters of fourteen and twelve, respectively.
- Emily's brief relationship with Roger reads like child grooming. Harry's interactions with his adopted daughters also fall uncomfortably close to that.
- Despite claiming that Jamie and friends should be treated just like any other person and have their nudism ignored rather than criticized, all she, Emily, and Caitlin (and eventually Harry and Hermione) ever want to talk about is nudity.
- Before Hermione and Harry meet Sam and learn that "he" is actually a she, they assume that Ron is just in the closet. One of the pieces of evidence Hermione uses to back that conclusion? When they were dating, he didn't pressure her for sex. Hermione also implies that Ron just didn't know he was gay at the time.
- There are a grand total of five male nudists in the series with any importance and eight females. Of those, two are dead, seven are children, and the others are ignored. The aforementioned seven are

constantly played for fanservice.

- When Hermione gets shot, several characters note how it narrowly missed her "reproductive organs" (which for some reason couldn't have been fixed by healing magic) with a strong implication that this would have been a Fate Worse Than Death, as though women exist only to reproduce. It's made worse by the Double Standard whereby a male character getting castrated is only mentioned in passing.
- As mentioned above, Emily's scenes stripping Kim are at least sexual harassment if not sexual assault- Kim does NOT want to be naked, and Emily refuses to take no for an answer. The author seems to think this is a good thing.
Wangst: Common
- Jamie, Emily, Caitlin, and Hermione discussing nudist "oppression".
- Every female (and a guy or two) breaks down whenever the plot thickens.
  - Indeed, it would seem breaking down into tears is about the only emotional reaction any of these characters are capable of. As one reviewer put it, "You know your characters are crying too much when you feel the need to lampshade it with "once again"."
Woobie: Kim and Ron.
- Kim is a shy girl with self esteem issues who has an abusive man for a stepfather. On her first day at Hogwarts, she's magically fastened to the ceiling by the school bully and the heroes only let her down after the one takes a minute to stare up her skirt and comment on the pattern of her underpants. She then is pressured by Emily into being a nudist under some of the most convoluted reasoning ever. Oh, and after her stepfather tries to rape her, Emily and Caitlin listen to her repeat the story in rapt interest.
- Ron is a werewolf, has been to Azkaban, and hooks up with a woman who has no qualms about pressuring him into the nudist lifestyle, while cruelly teasing him about his private bits and his inability to avoid having an erection while she hangs around him naked (and he made it clear that he's very uncomfortable about that last one). Hermione and Harry join in on said teasing, and ultimately ridicule him for asking his wife and son to please wear clothes in public.

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